Bu Lock?

Ok here's the list:
4x Skull Collector
2x Crystal Shard
4x Aether Vial
3x Fabricate
4x Chittering Rats
4x Ravenous Rats
4x Distress
4x Nezumi Shortfang
3x Kiku's Whisper

4x tendo's Icebridge
4x Salt Marsh
4x Island
1x Minamo, School at Water's Edge
1x Shizo, Death's Storehouse
10x Swamp

SB?

Perfect Combo Opening:
Turn 1: Swamp, Eather Vial
Turn 2: Vial counters = 1, Swamp, Nezumi Shortfang
Turn 3: Vial counters = 2, Swamp, Skull Collector, Vial in Ravenous Rats
Turn 4: Vial counters - 3 & bounce Ravenous Rats, Swamp, Ravenous Rats, Activate Shortfang, Vial in Chittering Rats, at appropriate time (ours or their turn)

opponent only ever sees 11 cards and we win on the back of damage from Stabwhisker the Odious (don't flip him in response to their draw step, only flip him when they fail to discard, making them discard the top card of their library makes them see a 12th card)

So is this any good? I have no idea, haven't even played it on MWS yet and it is a 3 card combo, but it does run at least 6 and as many as 8 copies of each combo piece. Common give me your thourghts, I know no-one is reading but I'll keep pretending someone's out there.